Thursday, 1 September 2016

The black jersey: WALT use language features in our writing

The black Jersey

I am looking
into the hood
of the black jersey.
it is as fluffy as a bunny
it is like a cosy blanket
it is as black as a pant-ha

its holes are 

steep dark tunnels
huge eyeballs staring at me
hungry mouths about
to eat my arms

The black jersey warms up my 

1 comment:

  1. Excellent use of simile and metaphor, Jordashay. I especially like your line "hungry mouths about to eat my arms".